ROUGH Cut 4

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Things I have done since the last rough cut:

1. Added diegetic sounds of Richard heavily breathing.
2. Added diegetic sounds of me heavily breathing.
3. Added/Re-edited some of the shots in the rape chase scene so that you see more shots of Richard and Alex running in between the shots of me running to create more suspense and action. It makes more sense now to the audience where Richard and Alex are compared to me. There is more continuity and flow now.
4. Shortened the diegetic sounds and shots of Alex tied up in the lair to make them come on show quicker to create and build the scare and tension better. 
5. Changed the font and colour of "Three years later" title to white. 
6. Added a fade in on the first shot that comes after the title "Three years later".
7. Added a quick flash spin effect on all the shots of Alex tied up in the lair.
8. Fixed the diegetic high heels sounds of when the killer walks down the stairs. I re-recorded the sounds of the high heels coming down the stairs to make it sound more realistic.